Friday, March 20, 2015

Creative Writing by Rus, age 9 (Writing from Pictures Assignment)



The Fishing Trip
by
Aidan Piercey

                Joe and Uncle Mark rushed out for the fun fishing contest. Joe felt the cool air rushing over his face when they entered the almost deafening harbor. Happy seagulls flew over head as if they were cheering, "WIN,WIN,WIN!"

            "You ready for the Blue Mammoth Fishing Contest, Buddy?!" Uncle Mark yelled. Joe ,who was almost leaping for joy, jumped into the unstable boat. Carefully they fit the bait on the line and then they pushed off from the harbor. The salty water sloshed in his face and he could feel the imaginary tug and the huge fish that would emerge from the water.
                Suddenly a yank shook the salty, slaking water. The big boat bobbed up and down. The water flew in Joe's eyes. He took his sleeve to wipe off the salty stingy stuff. Joe ,who was still trying to remove the salt from his eyes saw a huge fish on his boat.  Suddenly they saw a flash. It must have just been the sun. They held their fish with care. It was a blue mammoth. This was the prize fish. These were rare fish and were prized by any fisherman who caught them. Suddenly the fish yanked flipping the boat! They had lost the fish.
                Without any warning they found themselves gasping for breath. The fantastic fish flopped into the gleaming water. Suddenly they were swept under by a wave. A boat came out and brought them to shore. Huge gusts of wind almost froze their wet clothes. Because it was only early spring they grumpily walked to their car. Suddenly someone ran to them holding a trophy with a ton of money in it. He gave it to them and explained,"This for winning the contest. I am another fisherman who took a picture of your fish. Sorry about the flash." A large smile formed on Joe's face. They had won!

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