Sunday, December 23, 2007

Making Christmas Fudge By: Sis Age: 7

This is the first story (with dialogue) I have written!
It was fun how I made it!
I did it with Mom!
We used Shurley English!
Here it is . . .

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1. Main Idea- Making Christmas Fudge


2. Setting- Evening, Home


3.Characters- Mom, Mama's baby, Buddy, and Sis


4. Plot- The family works together to make fudge for Christmas.


5. Ending- Wrapping up the fudge
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Making Christmas Fudge
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Yesterday evening, Mommy
suggested that her kids , make fudge.
"Sis and Buddy, would you like to help me make fudge?" she asked.
"Yes!" they replied. They helped Mommy get the ingredients and read the recipe.
"Can I help stir?" Buddy asked. Mommy said yes.
When the fudge was cool, Mommy asked, "Sis, will you get a Ziplock bag and put
the fudge in it?" Finally the fudge was packed away and put in the freezer.


~~~~~~The End ~~~~~~
By Sis Age 7

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